Ashwalkers - Revision history

Grabowski: Changes the job template to the new one

2020-12-15T12:31:05Z

Changes the job template to the new one

imported>Ironsnake345: /* Foreign Invaders */ More directly towards the stated in-game reason. Also a disclaimer that anyone can use the crusher.

2019-08-24T03:26:02Z

Foreign Invaders: More directly towards the stated in-game reason. Also a disclaimer that anyone can use the crusher.

imported>Ironsnake345: Thought it was worth mentioning Gubbuck and Guthen, and a couple of their quirks. Also you have no idea how hard it was for me to find out that their milk is, in fact, saline-glucose solution.

2019-08-20T05:44:31Z

Thought it was worth mentioning Gubbuck and Guthen, and a couple of their quirks. Also you have no idea how hard it was for me to find out that their milk is, in fact, saline-glucose solution.

imported>Farquaar: Typo fix

2019-02-16T02:53:33Z

Typo fix

imported>Enzar: Fixed more grammar

2018-06-04T12:16:36Z

Fixed more grammar

imported>Enzar: Fixed formatting and grammar. Added some relevant info.

2018-06-04T12:03:55Z

Fixed formatting and grammar. Added some relevant info.

imported>Kingfish: /* Tribal Equipment */ spelling

2018-04-12T04:25:38Z

Tribal Equipment: spelling

imported>Gaidheal: Someone apparently unaware of the difference between advance and advanced. Fixed a few examples on this page.

2018-04-11T09:05:29Z

Someone apparently unaware of the difference between advance and advanced. Fixed a few examples on this page.

imported>Gaidheal at 09:01, 11 April 2018

2018-04-11T09:01:04Z

imported>XDTM: grammar

2017-01-28T18:11:49Z

grammar

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-{{JobPageHeader
+{{Important
 |headerbgcolor = black
 |headerfontcolor = white
-|stafftype = EXTRATERRESTRIAL
+|bgcolor = #DDAADD
-|imagebgcolor = #DDAADD
+|image = ashwalker.png
 |jobtitle = Ashwalker
 |access = N/A
-|additional = N/A
+|access2 = N/A
 |difficulty = Hard
-|superior = The Underground
+|supervisors = The underground
 |duties = Protect the Tendril, remove the intruders
 |guides = This is the guide
 }}
 You are an ash walker, one among [[Lavaland|the plains]]. The land is bountiful of prey and sustenance, but foreign powers move to exploit your land. You must build up your tribe and expel these aliens from your home.

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 These strange aliens clad in dark clothing have begun to invade your village. You must drive them off. They are armed with better weapons and armour, but they are few in numbers and are far away from home. Use your numbers to your advantage and you'll kill them easily.
-Their weapons are too complex and advanced for your kind to understand, as such you cannot use them.
+Their weapons are <s>too complex and advanced for your kind to understand</s> built for those with tiny, weak hands, and cannot accommodate the mighty, meaty mitts of an ashwalker. As such you cannot use them. Except the blasting spear they call the "crusher." That is fair game.
 ==The Wildlife==

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 ==For the underground==
 Your base of operations is small and humble, its lifeblood: the ash walker nest, a tendril converted and tamed to rapidly grow Ash Walker eggs near instantly when fed. Whenever any dead sentient corpse (such as the Legion's corpse, or Miners) is brought next to the nest, it'll be consumed and turned into a new egg.
 Outside there are a few small building, one with basic equipment for combat and farming, the other holding more advanced items, some necessary for exploration, and loot your tribe collected from past raids. Around the area you'll find a bonfire that can smelt ores, and a small garden where you can grow mushrooms.

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 }}
-You are an ash walker, one among [[Lavaland|the plains]]. The land is bountiful of prey and sustenance, but foriegn powers move to exploit your land. You must build up your tribe and expel these aliens from your home.
+You are an ash walker, one among [[Lavaland|the plains]]. The land is bountiful of prey and sustenance, but foreign powers move to exploit your land. You must build up your tribe and expel these aliens from your home.
 You are essentially a group of tribal Lizards who must <s>craft low tech weapons and armor</s> pick up wepons from the ground and loot corpses to fight off the more technologically advanced, but fewer in number, Human (or Lizard or Plasmaman) invaders.

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 Outside there are a few small building, one with basic equipment for combat and farming, the other holding more advanced items, some necessary for exploration, and loot your tribe collected from past raids. Around the area you'll find a bonfire that can smelt ores, and a small garden where you can grow mushrooms.
-The nest must be protected at all costs, its destruction would spell doom for your tribe.
+The village and nest must be protected at all costs, its destruction would spell doom for your tribe.
 ==[[Shaft Miner|Foreign Invaders]]==
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 |-
 ![[File:talisman.png|32px]]<br>Bone Talisman
-|Attached to bone armor, provides a small boost to base protection but a massive boost to bomb and biological protection. (Useless as accessory's don't provide protection)
+|Attached to bone armor, provides a small boost to base protection but a massive boost to bomb and biological protection. (Useless if worn as an accessory, as those don't provide protection)
 |Bone: 2<br>Sinew: 1
 |-

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 |duties = Protect the Tendril, remove the intruders
 |guides = This is the guide
-|quote = "SSSsss"
+|quote = "Allright, which one of you chucklefucksss releasssed the Legion?"
 }}
 You are an ash walker, one among [[Lavaland|the plains]]. The land is bountiful of prey and sustenance, but foriegn powers move to exploit your land. You must build up your tribe and expel these aliens from your home.
-You are essentially a group of tribal Lizards who must craft low tech weapons and armor to fight off the more technologically advanced, but fewer in number, Human (or Lizard or Plasmaman) invaders.
+You are essentially a group of tribal Lizards who must <s>craft low tech weapons and armor</s> pick up wepons from the ground and loot corpses to fight off the more technologically advanced, but fewer in number, Human (or Lizard or Plasmaman) invaders.
-=For the underground=
+==For the underground==
-Your base of operations is small and humble. Your lifeblood is the ash walker nest, a tendril converted and tamed to rapidly grow Ash Walker eggs near instantly when fed.
+Your base of operations is small and humble, its lifeblood: the ash walker nest, a tendril converted and tamed to rapidly grow Ash Walker eggs near instantly when fed. Whenever any dead sentient corpse (such as the Legion's corpse, or Miners) is brought next to the nest, it'll be consumed and turned into a new egg.
-Whenever any dead sentient corpse (such as the Legion's corpse, or Miners) is brought next to the nest, it'll be consumed and turned into a new Ash Walker egg.
+Outside there are a few small building, one with basic equipment for combat and farming, the other holding more advanced items, some necessary for exploration, and loot your tribe collected from past raids. Around the area you'll find a bonfire that can smelt ores, and a small garden where you can grow mushrooms.
 The nest must be protected at all costs, its destruction would spell doom for your tribe.
-=[[Shaft Miner|Foreign Invaders]]=
+==[[Shaft Miner|Foreign Invaders]]==
-These strange aliens clad in dark clothing have begun to invade your home. You must drive them off of your home. They are armed with better weapons and armour, but they are few in numbers and are far away from home. Use your numbers to your advantage and drive them away.
+These strange aliens clad in dark clothing have begun to invade your village. You must drive them off. They are armed with better weapons and armour, but they are few in numbers and are far away from home. Use your numbers to your advantage and you'll kill them easily.
-Their weapons are too complex and advanced for your kind to understand, as such you cannot wield and use their advanced weapons.
+Their weapons are too complex and advanced for your kind to understand, as such you cannot use them.
-=The Wildlife=
+==The Wildlife==
-In order to grow and prosper you must find and hunt down the wildlife of this land, for sustenance, reproduction and resources. The main reason to hunt the wildlife is to acquire bones and sinew, these resources are critical in crafting the more advanced tribal gear on offer to you.
+In order to grow and prosper you must find and hunt down the wildlife of this land, for sustenance, reproduction and resources. The main reason to hunt the wildlife is to acquire bones and sinew, these resources are critical in crafting the more advanced tribal gear on offer to you. Please note that animals can't see you while you're in the room containing the tendril, so you can hide there if something goes wrong.
 * Legions: The easiest prey, their attacks deal low damage and they are weak to your spears. The greatest advantage of the legions are their souls and their host. The host can be returned and reborn as an Ash Walker, while their Souls can be used for healing, or implanted to make them last. These creatures sadly do not drop crafting materials.
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 * Goliaths: Powerful creatures, but easily kited and killed by a skilled warrior. Do not allow them to stick you in place, keep mobile and rapidly move in, hit them, then move back. These creatures are a good prize to kill and can be killed by a single warrior. They are a worthy prey as they drop two bones and a goliath plate upon death.
-=Tribal Equipment=
+* Megafauna: Don't. Just stop. You'll get annihilated and possibly lure the beast to your nest, killing everyone.
 The following is a list of tribal equipment you can craft
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 |-
 ![[File:barmor.png|32px]]<br>Bone Armor
-|Respectable armor, provides medicore protection to melee (35), bullet (25) and laser (25) attacks.
+|Respectable armor, provides mediocre protection to melee (35), bullet (25) and laser (25) attacks.
 |Bone: 6
 |-

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 =The Wildlife=
-In order to grow and prosper you must find and hunt down the wildlife of this land, for sustenance, reproduction and resources. The main reason to hunt the wildlife is to acquire bones and sinew, these resources are critical in crafting the more advance tribal gear on offer to you.
+In order to grow and prosper you must find and hunt down the wildlife of this land, for sustenance, reproduction and resources. The main reason to hunt the wildlife is to acquire bones and sinew, these resources are critical in crafting the more advanced tribal gear on offer to you.
-* Legions: The easiest prey, their attacks deal low damage and they are weak to your spears. The greatest advantage of the legions are their souls and their host. The host can be returned and reborn as a Ash Walker, while their Souls can be used for healing, or implanted to make them last. These creatures sadly do not drop crafting materials.
+* Legions: The easiest prey, their attacks deal low damage and they are weak to your spears. The greatest advantage of the legions are their souls and their host. The host can be returned and reborn as an Ash Walker, while their Souls can be used for healing, or implanted to make them last. These creatures sadly do not drop crafting materials.
 * Watchers: Deadly creatures, they should never be approached alone. Their freeze attacks will slow you in place while they rip you to shreds. Attack in numbers. Watchers drop the coveted sinew, which is a necessary component for crafting higher tier weapons and armour. They also drop a single piece of bone.